I was very proud of my visual assignment I created for Truth and Bright Water, but there was still things I would have changed. I would have made it larger in size for it to be more effective. I feel if it was larger, and the items spread out it would be more visually appealing and not so crammed. With more space I could create a greater balance between the four items present in my visual. Another change I would make is the use of real items, I feel people project’s with actual items (not just pictures) was more effective. I would also include the black border all the way around the mirrors, because the black representing the darkness in families secrets is a large part of the project. I was proud of how much time and effort I put into this project. Out of all my years in English this was my favorite visual project I created. The write up portion of my visual I was also proud of, though next time I won’t do it the night before. In my revision I changed the word you, because it does not sound good. This project as a whole I felt I did an outstanding job, and for future projects I will remember that it is much easier if you take the time and plan and don’t rush.
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